If life could be more simple,
Maybe my heart wouldn't be so brittle,
If happiness didn't come with a cost,
Maybe I wouldn't always be so lost,
And if dreams didn't exist,
Maybe life wouldn't be so hard to resist.
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Author:
Kez (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 3rd, 2025 00:32
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 33
- Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Licence, NinjaGirl
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Comments6
beautiful
thx
yw
Got so tired of singing
The same old song
So I quit dreaming of
And started dreaming from
However, it's a long
Road to faith
Will I stay the course
Or lay myself waste?!
Haha, thank you
A poem well engineered as to rhyme, meter and format. Each nicely worked. The meaning as well made for a great read.
Yes, thank you
That's a great little write, life in a few lines
Yes, thanks
You are very welcome
Beautiful
Thank you Tony
You're welcome
Ooh, this is good! I love the shape, the rhyme, easy favorite!
Awe thank you NinjaGirl
Of course!
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