Modern Haiku

Naina Pandey

The strolling clouds,

glanced at the sun- basking on

tiny human backs.

- Naina Pandey

Author: Naina Pandey ( Offline)
Published: March 4th, 2025 08:56
Comment from author about the poem: Hey there 👋🏻, it's my first attempt to write a haiku...
Category: Haiku
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sorenbarrett March 4th, 2025 09:22
A most interesting personification of the sun and a fun metaphor at the same time
- Naina PandeyMarch 6th, 2025 03:24
  ☺️ thanks
Tony36 March 4th, 2025 10:36
Excellent write
- Naina PandeyMarch 6th, 2025 03:24
  Thankyou
- Tony36March 6th, 2025 08:20
  You're welcome
Poetic Licence March 4th, 2025 11:15
Few words, but beautiful, enjoyed the read
- Naina PandeyMarch 6th, 2025 03:24
  My pleasure!
Mutley Ravishes March 5th, 2025 00:42
I like it!
- Naina PandeyMarch 6th, 2025 03:24
  I'm glad!

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