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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

antique forgot

lay distraught

forget me not

lay, caught

caught then bought,

sold and used,

again abused.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it rolls off the tongue but rattles in the mind. The meaning of this may be many but what I took was feelings of being discarded, when there is an expectation of being cared for, of being nothing more than an object to be purchased and used therefore abused. A sad poem of people treated as objects. Whether a child, woman or weak person treated as a slave and or disposable property. Gut wrenching. A most ingenious write deserving of a fave.

    • NinjaGirl

      Thank you, it is a tragic cycle of events.

    • Poetic Licence

      I got the sense of the cycle of abuse, how people are used,abused and disposed of for someone else to then use and abuse,a sad but very powerful write, clever in it's writings

      • NinjaGirl

        Yes, thank you for reading!

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          This was witty, clever and rang so wonderfully that I had to ready it three times over! You are not just any ninja my friend...you are a brilliant ninja! An easy fave for me.🌹👏



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