Love is in the Air.
Looking always for a reason to try to find.
Out of your darkness, to stand in the light.
Very keen to fill up that sad vacant heart.
Eagerly looking for that little loving spark.
In front of your eyes, it gradually appears.
Someone whose life they want to share.
Igniting a warm glow inside your old skin.
Now it’s all there everything for your gain,
Teased by that big bright beautiful smile.
Heart blinded by those blue caring eyes.
Every worn-out bone is patiently revived.
And tears you cried are wiped and dried.
Inside you all that you dreamed or dared.
Reality has arrived now love is in the air.
Tobani.
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Now for something different from me, i know it is not very good, but i have had a try, can you whisper your critique, have a great day.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cassie58, GenXer Shamrocker ☘️
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It’s lovely ) a nice read ..
Thank you for your kind words, very much appreciated
(Whispers) Good write T. heehee.
Thank you for the whispers, very much appreciated
Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem
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Tobani don't shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem has many elements of touching and tender lines that pull at heart strings. A poem of love of which all of us have written and in love innocence is our best tool.
Thank you for your kind feedback, enjoy the rest of your day, it was my first attempt at ACrostic, not sure anyone noticed
To be honest I did not but this makes it all the better. An oversight on my part. Too hungry for meaning I overlooked the icing on the cake. To alert the sleepy eyed next time use the category spot and label it for the inattentive.
How good it is to love and be loved. And don’t worry, the expression of love is unique and very personal. Every sculptor needs a block before chipping away, I believe this is the same with poetry in a way of thinking and understanding it. 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you for your kind feedback, enjoy the rest of your day, was my first attempt at Acrostic not sure anyone noticed
Indeed it is an acrostic, making it even trickier to craft. Good work there. 🙏🏻🕊
these words could not possibly have fallen randomly or by chance in the order they have been so meticulously placed here .. this is surely a fine love poem in acrostic form, unless I am grossly mistaken .. Neville
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Superb work, my friend.
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Don’t do yourself down Tobani, this is a beautiful acrostic on love and I am shouting it out loud. A fine poem and very much enjoyed. Have a great evening.
Thank you Cassie for your very kind words,have a wonderful day
I admire your indefatigable thirst for love. Keep it up!
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Love is so strong when it comes comes your way Tobani, as it has done for me.
Andy
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A beautiful rhythm to this. Had to favorite it!
Thank you for your kind words, very much appreciated
What's love got to do with it? Well, in this poem particularly...EVERYTHING! LOL! Well done, Tobani! Faved. 🌹👏
Thank you for your kind words, wise man say have a great week
Thank you, friend! You too. I will try...key word try...to take that advice LOL! I hope the week cooperates!
Thank you
You're welcome.
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