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π ππ»ποΈ
π ππ»ποΈ
I am your boarding pass,
A gateway to endless horizons.
In my codes and numbers,
Your journey awaits—charted and clear.
I am the key,
Sliding you past barriers to boundless discovery.
Through me, knowledge becomes motion,
And the infinite unravels before you.
Grip me tight, for I lead the way.
I am your personalised ticket to ride:
A tool, a guide, a passage
To realms both familiar and unknown.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: March 13th, 2025 03:34
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 30
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Mutley Ravishes
Comments10
Believe me Cryptic I have flown to endless horizons and when I got there they looked the same as the ones I left. I do like the idea of metaphor in this poem of endless internal horizons where imagination does the flying. I fly that airline frequently and have lots of frequent flyer miles accrued. A fun read my friend.
Yeah, I know what you mean there. And agree to keep the metaphor which is quite good, all things considered. Thanks heaps, Soren ππ»ποΈ
My imagination does a lot of flying and I don't always like the destinations, a lovely write
Ah, that is very well noted! Perhaps fodder for another poem ππ»ποΈ
In this I read one's imagination. Where it takes one is limitless. But the beauty of this poem is its openness to interpretation. This could be anything. If we think in terms of spirituality and religion, the boarding pass could be faith. In other situations...the possibilities are limitless. Well done, my friend! πΉπ
Now thatβs a stirring review and interpretation Tristan. Glad the poem lent itself to such possibilities; thank youππ»π
You are welcome, my friend!!!
We shall have to wait and see, but until then, I shall hang on to the thought tight .. Neville
Oh, see what, my friend?
Excellent write
Superb
Good write SB.
Wonderful personificaition. Enjoyed reading. We are all universes that people can discover
a lovely write
"I am" is indeed the key, as I'm sure you already know. Turning that key and stepping into living realities takes a whole lot of patience, gratitude, persistence, faith and love, doesn't it?!
Great write.
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