there was a little cat of the furry sort
and he used to dream he was an astronaut
climbing in his rocket heading to the stars
landing down on jupiter then flying on to mars
he could float in space and float around all day
all along the universe and across the milky way
he had a little suit and and big space hat
he was a proper astronaut a proper spaceman cat
when his dream was over he woke in his bed
the thoughts of being an astronaut still running through his head
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A fun poem of cat fantasy. I have wondered what dogs and cats dream of. A fun read Jim
i have a cat dont like flying tho lol
thanks for always lovely comment jim
This poem would be great in a children’s book, fully illustrated. A lovely visual offering Jim. Very nicely penned. Have a lovely day.
hi Cassie glad you like poem
i have done quite a lot children poems
about animals had one published by bbc years ago
sun shine today can get in garden hooray
was gonna send roxy to space she dont like flying
no pussport either lol
your kite poem was beautful left comment for you
thankyou for always lovely comment
keep warm keep well keep safe jim xxx
Thank you Jim. Will respond soon .
Thought I hadn’t responded to my Kite poem, but I did. So pleased you enjoyed it Jim. All the best.
was beautiful as always you have amazing use of words
to depict your poems so well you are a talented writer
never stop writing jim xxx
Excellent write Jim
thankyou for comment
You're welcome
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