Liberation

rebellion_in_sanity

I faded into the night  
A seemingly escapist act  
A defeat in everyone's eyes

 

Stepped over the threshold of  
My limited being  
A life of conformance  
A made-up picture of success  
Which everyone likes to see

 

Smell of liberation hit my nose  
Goosebumps popped up when it touched my skin  
For the first time of my being  
I realized what freedom truly means

 

I will walk on, my friends  
In drunk stupor of liberty  
I will walk and walk  
To experience being bold

 

I pray to almighty for strength  
Please let me tread the path  
I want to feel once  
What you wanted me to see  
What you wanted to feel  
When you gave me this life

  • Author: Rebellion In Sanity (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2025 01:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: My prayer to almighty to give me strength
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written

    • rebellion_in_sanity

      My deep gratitude for the read and your thoughts 🙏

    • Poetic Licence

      I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written

    • Tony36

      Excellent write

      • rebellion_in_sanity

        Thank you very much. Really appreciate your support 🙏

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Thomas W Case

          Superb work.

          • rebellion_in_sanity

            Thanks for stopping by and your encouraging words. Deeply appreciate your support 🙏

          • Cassie58

            We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.

            • rebellion_in_sanity

              Please accept my gratitude for your read and very valuable comments which captured the very essence of the spirit. Thank you very much

            • Neville



              It costs nothing does it, but it's priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville

              • rebellion_in_sanity

                Thank you so very much. Your support is deeply appreciated 🙏



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