what you've done

sheta


Notice of absence from sheta
if im not on,im looking for an adventure
or my wifi is off ooorrrrr kezexxe is beating me on mario

what you did cannot be undone

 

my heart is already torn

 

and am cheerful and cute on the outside

 

torn and heartless within

 

but look a little deeper

 

i am still feeling feelings

 

of love and laughter

 

people say i have no feelings

 

that i am stone cold

 

my grandma laid there

 

dying before me

 

and i was stone cold

 

but i wish i weren't 

 

i really love people

 

i really loved you

  • Author: The Adventurer (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 8th, 2025 00:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: im sorry i could not be more for you im sorry
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 25
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  • ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ

    Time for someone to get a beating

  • sorenbarrett

    Stone cold may very well just be a cold shell over a warm interior. It may not be an issue of not having feelings but just not able to show them. A lovely write

    • sheta

      thanks

    • rainbow 1

      yous talking bout your ex you know pookie ethen reads these right if you still like your ex you shouldent date

      • sheta

        im not saying anything
        i just made up a poem

        • rainbow 1

          oh sorry

          • sheta

            its ok

            • rainbow 1

              yeah do you know who my profile pic is

              • sheta

                no
                do you know who mine is?

                • rainbow 1

                  is it the girl from gun gal online and mine is Ben Simmons

                  • sheta

                    cool and no its me lololol

                    • rainbow 1

                      stop the cap

                      • sheta

                        hm lol it IS ME

                        • rainbow 1

                          ok

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          Wow! Powerful poem, sheta. Thank you for sharing. Quite the emotions you are going through. I agree with what Soren said, not being able to show emotion is not the same things as being devoid of them. I can relate with this, because there have been times in my life where I am sure I looked stone cold, but I was not in reality. Anyway, regardless, well done on this fantastic and though-provoking, and heart-wrenching poem. ❤️🙏

                          • sheta

                            thanks tristan

                          • Cassie58

                            There are lots of people who can’t convey emotion but that doesn’t mean to say you don’t feel it. Not everyone wears their emotions on their sleeve for everyone to see. I enjoyed reading your poem today.

                            • sheta

                              thanks cassie



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