Falling Down
I was walking through the cave,
when suddenly my feet slipped
and the flame went off,
I have been falling since ,
even in light
Dont know its the fear that gripped
or, the heart that's lost.
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Author:
_jyotsna27 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: No comments from my side on this one, its up to the readers to interpret wether literally or metaphorically. I love to hear views if any...🙂
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Comments1
Love metaphors and this is definitely one. The cave could be many things (darkness, mystery, a birth canal, transformation, protection) the flame (spiritual awakening, passion, cleansing, purification) I take it that the author was in transformation of passion but this went out and even in knowledge of this (light) it is not regained either due to fear or loss of heart. Very nicely felt.
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