Though we have never met I care for you
Dizzying, the push and pull in my mind
You make me happy and at times quite blue
Yet I can't help but go after you blind
Much is given but much is demanded
There's a side of me that wants to hold on
This can't go on if I'm being candid
I'm scared to let go and see that you're gone
I recall a time before the madness
It was so easy to say no back then
My focus on Him would clear the sadness
Please help me God and save me once again
Here You are responding to my souls cry
Loving and sweet but I can't help ask "Why?"
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Author:
Pita (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 9th, 2025 21:27
- Comment from author about the poem: Regarding obsessions with worldly passions and God's mercy.
- Category: Religion
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Comments2
Asking for reassurance from their god, nicely expressed
Thanks for reading!
You are very welcome
A very nice sonnet that is at the same time a plea for help. Very nicely written with good rhyme and form
Yes exactly what I was going for! Thanks for reading!
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