We are to pass a long road now together -
Rebirth of dreams will cherish both of us…
Let’s say ‘goodbye’ to all the sadness ever,
In stream of days to stop the evening rush…
Let’s say ‘hello’ and welcome now gladness,
The joy of love is blended now with,
Performing strings with no hint to madness,
And say ‘farewell’ to days of gloomy spleen…
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This is breathtakingly beautiful! Your words weave a tapestry of hope, love, and joy inviting us to embark on a new journey, leaving sadness behind. Well written!!!
Many thanks, my dear!
Ah Hippocrates and the spleen issue. What type of bile do we have today, yellow, black? A fun read with good rhyme.
thanks a lot!
Great write
thanks, Tony
You're welcome
An entertaining read nicely crafted, enjoyed
thank you!
You are very welcome
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