Notice of absence from sheta
if im not on,im looking for an adventure
or my wifi is off ooorrrrr kezexxe is beating me on mario
if im not on,im looking for an adventure
or my wifi is off ooorrrrr kezexxe is beating me on mario
don't run from your problems
don't look back and think
you made too many mistakes
don't scream for help
when you know no one will answer
don't hate just beacuse you are hated
don't kill if you haven't been killed
don't cry if no one is there to pity you
don't give up beacuse everyone else does
don't die cause you think it's the only way
love because you were loved first
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The Adventurer (Pseudonym) (
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Comments5
Good advice in poetic form. Motivational, inspirational, educational. Very nicely done.
thanks soren
"don't kill if you haven't been killed"...indeed. Which simply translates...JUST DON'T KILL! I love that line because it makes one pause and think...wait...but if I've been killed how can I kill? Exactly! Just don't. And if everyone followed this advice, we'd be close to Utopia...Sigh. Well done, my friend! Love this poem lots. Amen to all this, and especially the ending. A fave for sure.
thanks tristan!!!! yea after i looked my poem over and saw that line i thought "wait what? you cant kill if youre dead lol but i guess i wrote it haha"
You’re welcome. 😊
Inspirational, uplifting with a strong message, enjoyed the read
thanks
You are very welcome
its alright
thanks
Its actually better than alright
AMAZING
awww thanks kenz you're da best
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