Notice of absence from Caring dove
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
The soft sky is missing the clouds
wrote their colour onto a piece of peaceful paper
they missed the white cotton clouds
so decided to land on a place with the same colour
writing as if talking to daisy petals
and saying hello to the wings of those dreaming doves
the soft sky can’t always be by by those clouds
sometimes missing something that can be a part of their world
a part of their space
so they find a place with a piece of paper
a colour a place that somehow makes them feel
their with something close to what’s often a part of their world
a part of their space
the sky moved wherever they wished
because they felt they could
just to be with a colour that resembles those cotton clouds
finding that same peaceful colour elsewhere
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not sure about this writing .. just was writing with a blue pen , so thought to write about the blue sky and those white clouds
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Comments5
Very nice and I guess that feeling at home is most important. A lovely write
Thankyou for your kind words on my poem .. I think sometimes we can miss things / people / places and yes sometimes we just want to feel at ‘ home ‘
Guess we might not always feel that way
But it’s nice to feel peaceful
Appreciate your comment
I love this, my friend. Quite creative. I absolutely adore the lines: "The soft sky is missing the clouds, wrote their colour onto a piece of peaceful paper". The creativity of those lines deliver and keep one reading; the rest of the poem lives up with rich imagery and really sparks thought. Well done one this! Sometimes the best poems come to us randomly. Glad you followed the muse! 🌹👏
Thanks so much for the kind supportive words .. I really appreciate that .. Thankyou 🙂
Glad you liked my poem
You're welcome!
Excellent write
Thankyou Tony 🙂
You're welcome
Beautiful.
Thanks ))
Its about feeling comfortable and safe and sometimes to get those feelings you have to move, lovely write
Your right .. sometimes you need to move.. thanks so much for your support
Sometimes things just feel a bit ‘wrong ‘and you feel a bit out of place for some reason
It's a common feeling to have, have a good evening
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