The breezy wind wrapped around me and i realised that
Winter is almost over .
The sky, looks soo pretty with
Those stars
And i wonder which one of them must be you .
They all seem so incredibly , beautiful
Perhaps it's because you're up there .
I could feel something warm falling out from my eyes
The breezy wind made me sense it more clearly
And I can't help but
wonder if death ever feels guilty for taking away so much
Why must it take ?
Why is it so necessary?
Feels so unfair
soo unbearably unfair
That I could feel your presence yet
You are not here with me
Only the cold wind remains and winter is almost over .
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Author:
sweksha (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I was playing sky today (game) and when I was traveling though a beautiful place i came across a note left by someone for his /her late friend. Death really takes away soo much and indeed we don't know if it ever feels guilty for it . So i wrote smth out of it :) May God keep you and ur loved one safe 🍀
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Comments3
A beautiful write with great images. Lovely
A very sensitive and beautiful write, feeling the presence of a loved one even though you know there not there, a write many will relate to, enjoyed the read
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