Drowning in the mist

Ally

The clock ticks loud a heavy sound 

She stares, unseeing, at the wall

Obligations all around, preparing,

For yet another to fall

Her book lays open, pages stark,

But the words just swim, a blurry haze

A fragile boat lost in the dark,

Through life’s demanding

Endless maze

She needs to rise, she needs to play her part

To smile,

To serve,

To laugh,

To be a perfect grace.

But weariness has seized her heart

A hollow shell, an empty space 

The pressure mounts a crushing weight

To keep her grades, to keep the pace

She seals her weary, anxious state

Hoping soon, to find release

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  • Poetic Licence

    A write of someone feeling the pressure of life getting on top of them, a very relatable write, well written

  • sorenbarrett

    I remember those days. There was never enough time to learn what one needed to know and would be tested on as well as maintain social relationships and do family obligations or chores. But then it could have been worse and was in my father's day when in the depression he worked a job as well as went to school. Good write.



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