I did not see
The sky above
Nor angels note
From where I stood
My tearful eyes
In downward vision
Toward my feet
Upon decision.
To leave with haste
All Ive known
My heart to beat
In monotone
My eyes blurred
With tears hot
My pounding brain
Thoughts to stop.
Simply now
One step at a time
No longer still
Loves obedient clown
That angels note
Through grief is read
I will survive
Words in my head.
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Comments3
This one shows good rhyme and meter in its flow with short lines that make it easy to hear the rhyme. Nicely done
thanking you
Even expressing sad thoughts and emotions, the write ends on a positive note, I will survive, nicely written
many thanks
You are very welcome
Oh what a good thing that the note was finally read🙏🏻🕊hope that it wasn’t too late🕊🙏🏻
appreciated, thanks
You’re welcome 🙏🏻🕊
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