The truth of freedom

Heledd

a choice however hard it is. will always be a choice does it make you quiver? does it 

 

although she was trapped like a bird in a cage. she spread her wings nonetheless 

 

with the sunlight shining on her hair she ran across the field like a stallion galloping freely when she arrived at the tree.

 

she held her spirit in her gentle hands as she passed it to the tree she said in a sad and shaky voice 

 

''look after this for me please as I am afraid I cannot'' then as swift as night she returned to her cage 

 

you see this girl she could be me or she could be you.

 

Does that scare you? i know it does.

we've all felt trapped at one point in our lives but now that I show you you act as if you don't know what its like as if you know nothing.

 

you never know whos trapped.

it could be your best friend or a sibling and you'd be none the wiser to their suffering.

  • Author: Heledd (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 16th, 2025 04:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is the first ever poem I ever wrote
  • Category: Short story
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  • arqios

    Welcome to MPS šŸ™šŸ»šŸ•Š

  • Poetic Licence

    An important message in this write, we dont really know what is truly happening in people's life's or behind closed doors, and mainly because we are to focused on our own, nicely expressed and written

    • Heledd

      Thank you Iā€™m still working on improving my writing so I hope that they get better šŸ©·

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome, it was a lovely write

      • sorenbarrett

        In one way or another we are all trapped in our own worlds. Some trapped by physical control others emotional, or mental, some trapped by situations and many trapped by their own choice of greed, love, hate, lust, hope. We are all trapped. Good write

        • Heledd

          Thank you ā­ļø



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