when your mind is in a whirl and it begins to slide
only thing that comes to you its time for suicide
it can be so hurtful for friends and family
the people that loved you they will no longer see.
it isnt fair to them now they dont have you
yet they have to suffer for there whole life through
so if you feel thats life is just to much for you
get the help you need is the thing to do
save the ones that love you from a tragedy
there suffering and pain dosent have to be
if you care about them show them that you do
get the help you need that is waiting there for you
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A most needed poem for those that have reached the end of their rope. Nicely said Jim
its a shame when they dont reach out
thankyou for always lovely comment
means a lot jim
Always a timely message! Well done on this, Jim! 🌹👏
thankyou for comment
You're welcome.
thanks
I reas recently that kids ages of 10, 11 and younger have been flooding suicide hot lines. Suicide is tragic and can effect anybody at any given time. To me it's selfish but sometimes I guess people don't know how to end their suffering any other way. Great write.
hi thankyou for comment so sad to see
reaching out can be hard to but has to be done
thankyou so much for comment means a lot jim
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