Notice of absence from Caring dove
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
Sometimes your soul feels sad and your mind feels tired .. not a good day today
Green sits softly on the cotton clouds
the place where friendly flowers often rest
above the talking trees
not simply by their feet
or at the distance
but with the cotton clouds
talking to that place of dove like peace
that rest by the blue waves in the sky
looking at the light leaves from a different angle
Seeing the talking tree in a different light
the green grass is now not just simply resting in one same spot
she’s sitting wjth the cotton clouds
even drifting as they move across the sky
allowed to tenderly travel
see the light leaves in a different light
see the birds as they fly in the blues beside the sun
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I think sometimes we can feel a bit stuck with how we feel and we just want to move away from that a bit . Been struggling today with some difficult feelings Least when we write we can focus elsewhere for a bit I just thought to write about the green pen I was writing with and the white paper made me think of the clouds
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A fine write dove. The green sitting harmoniously in Nature.
Thankyou !
A different perspective adds distance and scope to our view. Here the inverted vision reveals a metaphor of the mind that needs to step out of this world to see it. Most lovely
Thank you )) I think sometimes we can feel stuck in certain places or with certain feelings and sometimes we just want to move away from that place . Sometimes we just want to move away from what’s hurting us . I guess I was trying to distract myself
Thankyou so much )
Glad you liked my poem
Distraction can be a good tool. Poetry is my tool of distraction
It can be yeah . It can be frustrating when we feel ways that upset us tho .
Thanks for your support
By moving around it allows us to see things and people from different perspectives and then hopefully get a better understanding, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
Thanks so much for the supportive thoughtful comment .. that’s true )
Glad you enjoyed the read
Thankyou
You are very welcome
I love the natural imagery in this, all coming from a green paper and white paper. You have quite the vivid imagination my friend. This is a beautiful work of art. Brava! 🌹🌹☘️🎩☘️
Thanks so much for your lovely comment on my poem 🙂
🌿🍀☁️
Glad you enjoyed the read
You are most welcome!
Hey my friend so good to see your words still shining and just what I needed.
Thank you
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