Love was when I fell in love with you
Faint petals along with swan of melody here and now
Apollo----The fierce yet handsome of a man
Made me emotional and only his fan
The same Oak tree was old
But our ages immortal, untold
I found repose through his 'Ashk'
While he continued to be my beloved prince of love and busk.........
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Author:
Simurgh (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Benim ashkim means My love in Turkish!! Nowadays learning Turkish more passionately Loved the language when I watched the Magnificent Century the historical series of Ottoman Empire precisely Of Sultan Suleiman the Magnificent' for 3 times containing 139 episodes. This poem celebrates my love and devotion for Apollo----The Sun God. Also it creates a sense of devotional love or divine grace of almighty through this poem....... If you find it beautiful, do comment. Your feedback and insights will help me write more beautiful poems in the coming days! Any Turkish Poet here? If there, kindly do become my friend😊🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 With love and warm regards Simurgh A renowned poetic bard from India
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Do comment on this poem guys!! Your insights are valuable for me......
Wishing you happy journey with your poems as well!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
A nicely written peace of faith and devotion, enjoyed the read
Thank you Tobani for so nice a message! As you enjoyed the read, I feel success of my poetry in love.
Your insights are always appreciated.....
Thanks again dear.....
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
You are very welcome
The meter and wording of this poem give it an eastern flavor and it seems almost classic in its form. Very nice I could feel the sun shine from out of it.
Thank you Soren for so nice a message! Your insights are always beautiful and praiseworthy.
Hope my poems are effective in rousing emotion of love.....
Much appreciated 😊🌷🌷🌷🌹🌹🌹
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
Excellent write
Thank you Tony for so nice a reply! Much appreciated 😊
Your thoughts are always valuable.....
With love and warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
With love and warm regards you're welcome
Thank for so nice a reply 🌹 much appreciated 😊
With warm regards
Simurgh
A renowned poetic bard from India
You're welcome
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