Winner Takes All

Mutley Ravishes

I've won atrophy

By rejecting biology

In favor of technology

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  • arqios

    Superb take 🙏🏻🕊

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks! I got the inspiration from a recent interview with Greg Braden on the Next Level Soul Podcast (take a listen if you’ve the time).

      • arqios

        I’ll surely be looking that up! Cheers 🙏🏻🕊️

      • Poetic Licence

        Brilliant

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Thank you. I can’t really take the credit. I guess my ears could, though!

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome

          • sorenbarrett

            I always loved word play and here it is at its best. A marvelous weaving of spelling word meaning and follow up lines to create great fun a fave

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Even though I’ve been researching for years on end, what Greg Braden said in a recent interview distilled it beautifully.
              Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your appreciative comment!

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              TRUTH! Well done, my friend!

            • Tom Dylan

              Nailed it! Nicely done. A great write.

              • Mutley Ravishes

                I guess this time round I managed to hit the nail instead of my hand! (for once). Thanks a million, Tom.

              • Tony36

                BRAVO

                • Mutley Ravishes

                  Thanks for dropping by, Tony.

                  • Tony36

                    You're welcome

                  • RSM0812

                    How much is too much?

                    • Mutley Ravishes

                      I guess it's when a direct assault is made on the gods, just as the Numenorians tried it on in Tolkien's works.

                    • NafisaSB

                      hmm, sounds familiar, and seen quite frequently these days, if one cares to look around

                      • Mutley Ravishes

                        For sure. I have to keep an eye on how much I use it too.

                        • NafisaSB

                          yes, we all do..take care

                        • vicecream

                          Clever!

                          • Mutley Ravishes

                            Thanks a million! I got the inspiration from Greg Braden.

                            • vicecream

                              Of course! Also your profile picture looks just like a place in Utah that I’ve been to! It reminds me every time i see it !

                              • Mutley Ravishes

                                Well, it's on earth, just happens to be in Japan! Would love to visit Utah someday to see the nature (and Bob Gardener)

                                • vicecream

                                  Oh wow that is the next country I am hoping to go to is Japan ! Beautiful picture



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