Winner Takes All

Mutley Ravishes

I've won atrophy

By rejecting biology

In favor of technology

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  • arqios

    Superb take ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks! I got the inspiration from a recent interview with Greg Braden on the Next Level Soul Podcast (take a listen if youโ€™ve the time).

      • arqios

        Iโ€™ll surely be looking that up! Cheers ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

      • Poetic Licence

        Brilliant

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Thank you. I canโ€™t really take the credit. I guess my ears could, though!

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome

          • sorenbarrett

            I always loved word play and here it is at its best. A marvelous weaving of spelling word meaning and follow up lines to create great fun a fave

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Even though Iโ€™ve been researching for years on end, what Greg Braden said in a recent interview distilled it beautifully.
              Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your appreciative comment!

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              TRUTH! Well done, my friend!

            • Tom Dylan

              Nailed it! Nicely done. A great write.

              • Mutley Ravishes

                I guess this time round I managed to hit the nail instead of my hand! (for once). Thanks a million, Tom.

              • Tony36

                BRAVO

                • Mutley Ravishes

                  Thanks for dropping by, Tony.

                  • Tony36

                    You're welcome

                  • RSM0812

                    How much is too much?

                    • Mutley Ravishes

                      I guess it's when a direct assault is made on the gods, just as the Numenorians tried it on in Tolkien's works.



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