Whispers at Dawn
James 4:14
Whereas ye know not what shall be on the morrow. For what is your life? It is even a vapour, that appeareth for a little time, and then vanisheth away.
Like a mist that greets the dawn, Fleeting, fragile, soon withdrawn.
Life appears, then fades away, A breath, a whisper, a fleeting stay.
Seek not tomorrow, cherish today, For in this moment, my heart shall pray.
LA
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Author:
LA (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 19th, 2025 04:51
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments4
A truly haunting verse whose power increases with every year and every birthday🙏🏻🕊
If only we as people could keep the thought in mind, perhaps we would treat each other better.
This poem does help bring it to the front of thought 🕊🙏🏻
Set in a new frame of Biblical verse the words Carpe Diem ring out. Nicely done
That is a parallel sentiment, but people often turn it into a "no quarter" kind of mindset.
BRAVO
Write on, Tony!
You're welcome
Well done and powerfully true message. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond Tristan.
You are welcome, LA. 😊
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