When the Sub-conscience Speaks

Accidental Poet

Subtle voices in your head

Things that catch your eye

Tell tale signs that you read

That something has gone awry

 

Intuition tells you

To pay closer attention

Something’s out of place

You may be resenting

 

Someone of cloaking disguise

Hiding bad intent

Two faces of one mind

Wicked thoughts with no repent

 

Trust so often abused

Raped and disrespected

To the point of extinction

And no hope resurrected

 

Lies full of deception

Will fall victim of the truth

When the sub-conscience speaks

The unsuspected sleuth

 

  • Author: Sharon\'s Poet (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 19th, 2025 10:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write AP.

    • Accidental Poet

      Thanks Orchi, my intuition tells me KP on the loose. 😁

      • orchidee

        Yes lol. She\'s not human so she wouldn't pass the \'verify\' check on here. lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        Intuition poorly understood is a powerful tool maybe a trait passed on from distant ancestors it warns of things unseen and is not well explained by science. A lovely poem about this process

        • Accidental Poet

          Thanks soren, always appreciate your reviews. 😁👍

        • Poetic Licence

          Intuition is a valuable tool if we used it, more often then not it is right, enjoyed the read

          • Accidental Poet

            Thanks Poetic, Glad you enjoyed the read. 😉👍

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • Teddy.15

              An inside Sherlock Holmes perhaps 🤣 yes the sub conscience can certainly make your mind feel guilty superb, of course unless you are Donald Trump of course. A.P I know you know I'm in pain right now over world politics. 🌹

              • Accidental Poet

                The only ones who are not in pain are the Trump Chumps who voted for him. I feel your pain Teddy. 🙄

              • Poetic Dan

                Wow that is perfect timing as my voices all stopped just to absorb your words!
                Thank you for sharing and helping me do what I do... whatever that is.
                Good to see you my friend

              • Goldfinch60

                |The sub-conscience knows all AP. Good words.

                Andy

                • Accidental Poet

                  Thanks Andy. The sub-conscience knows there is always more than what meets the eye. 😉👍

                • Tom Dylan

                  A fine write, AP.

                  • Accidental Poet

                    Thank you Tom. There’s always more to a story
                    Than just what you expected from it. 😉👍

                  • NafisaSB

                    unfortunately we see many such people around.. and the intuition never lies

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Thank you for reading and your comment Nafisa. 😉👍



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