Come on ! I'll take you there !
Well ' watch the old world crumble
and the stars fading away in the blues...
I promise ,I won't play the macho ,
I'll become sage ,
I'm no longer a hero ...
We will live again !
away from reason and concrete .
To devoted followers
we entrust dreams of metal
fragile like a crystal ...
Maybe there's happiness out there,
where the man has never walked the hurt
and the woman didn't have the key
to the orchard ...
Come on ! I'll take you there !
Where the hours of the book
still have that taste of paradise
and a thousand shades of dawn
in an amourous morning ...
We'll sit under the tree
without bad and evil
gazing at the river
that no tear can trouble
and this cloudless sky
where the angels play us a famous jazz...
Come on ! I'll take you there !
where no one ever goes ,
never looking up ...
We will live again !
I close my eyelids
and a Brahms lied memory
springs to mind ,
musical fragrant landscape ...
And we become globe trotters
in the era of the street man !
But there always be mister Bean
to disturb the gladiator's fight !
My eyes are closing ,dear soul
to whom I speak ...
You are always there ,
silent and faithful companion .
Don't be scared this polar monster
is only a tender teddy bear !
You'll always be there !
Until that moment
when entering the legend
we will live again !
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Author:
lorenz (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
Many great metaphors, the garden of Eden tree of life and knowledge on and on. An invitation to join together in the journey. Very nice
You're welcome to join this joyous expedition !
Thank you for the invitation
This dreamy poem is imbued with deep symbolism and resembles a spiritual journey in search of a lost paradise. It leaves a sense of luminous longing and aspiration for freedom somewhere beyond the material world. Beautifully done.
Resolutely optimistic and full of happy existentialism !
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