Being old and bold
We drop on ourselves in cold
Hopes to sold
While love to hold
With pitter-patter of rain
We blow in violin being simple and plain
Our mind lost
In someone else's thought or their cost
Clouds of book
While heads to shook
In vain or to look
Our blue sky and thou cook!
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Author:
Simurgh (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The poem is quite a fable which talks about ups and downs and fleeting nature of the life.....The poem has a lyrical tone and a playful reflection Hope you will enjoy this poem, I wrote this poem back in my school days when I started writing poetry! Your insights are always appreciated and valuable for me...... With love and warm regards Simurgh A renowned poetic bard from India
- Category: Fable
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Comments2
With its AAAA rhyme scheme it bounces like a bubble on the surface of the sea. it sets the mood.
It flows nicely as you read about the sea saw of life, enjoyed the read
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