You never forgave him
For what you have done
Shame forever burning
Laid upon the sun
Guilty conscience rumbling
Thundering cross the sky
Forever he is sorry
Everytime that you lie
Panic stricken face
Lightning cracks the tree
Cyclonic anger
Swirling toward he
Horrifying darkness
Eclipsing out the light
Confusion seeing truth
Getting knocked from his eye
Falling into anguish
The mountain side gives way
He's begging for forgiveness
For what you did today
Disgust is blowing hard
Redirecting from the mirror
Black clouds keep rising
No hope for getting clearer
Earth shaking on the edge
Razor in his hand
Laying in the tub
Crimson waves on the sand
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Author:
KTay (
Online) - Published: March 25th, 2025 09:35
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Comments3
I love the line ( you never forgave him for what you have done) That sets the scene well. A mind provoking poem
Thank you!
Excellent write
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You're welcome
This a wonderful write, I am entirely sure how it is meant to come across, but I got a sense of someone looking in a mirror but seeing there reflection as a different person, probably wrong, still enjoyed the read
Thanks. It is about abuse and being made to believe you\'re the one at fault, and the depression that comes along with that.
Thank you for explaining, makes sense it was a good write
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You are very welcome
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