The word system

Lorenz

A gracious muse gave me 

the strange gift  and torment

of tasting the music of words 

to perceive their secret colors

and to see their deep  scent ...

Words are living beings 

that speak to each other 

with humor or terror ...

 They can die of boredom ,

travel through space and time

or just staying at home...

 They can suddenly changing clothes

and wickedly gagging you 

 without any clemency ...

Deceiptive and amusing creatures

aiming to be different 

and turning away indifferently ...

 They take the path of wandering

or surfing oceans of incoherence...

Words fight and embrace,

clawing  the face of love 

 applauding and cursing ,

 leaving ,without a farewell letter...

Just a '' Man- bites god '' story

 on the last page ..

 A mischievous  muse 

makes me speak in incongruous words

disturbing the crowd order .

On the blank walls of your  lost worlds

I draw the why of your silence and absence !

 I'd like a little more violence ,

you answer me with a polite sentence ...

But once they take me away 

for  verbal stumble on the public voice 

 you'll drive me out of your sunday turkeys !

  Hourless words are exchanged 

  between  dogs of a certain age

that fate has brought together,

discussing hedge maintenance ... 

 Words last only as long as the rain

  that ends like a killer wave

making quiet river boil over ...

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Lorenz you captured me with this poem. The personification of words such a creative idea that fits so well with the complexities of language like the complexities of people that use it. Mistaken, confused, truthful and deceitful it sooths and violates. Well said in such a charming manner. A fave

    • Lorenz

      The necrological babbel . Thanks for the rewarding fave !

    • Ellen Marsell

      A remarkable exploration of language, its power, and its treachery. You convey how words take on a life of their own—sometimes obedient, sometimes rebellious, always unpredictable. There is a subtle irony in how the poet, seemingly the master of words, ends up at their mercy, carried away by their flow. Strong, imaginative and profound text!

      • Lorenz

        Word like light has a dual nature .undulatory and embodied .

      • Sealgair

        This piece really gets to the heart of what it means to work with words.

        Great work!

        • Lorenz

          A multifaced interlocutor who is yourself !



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