Moments

Garth Rakumakoe

A cozy bask

in a patch of sun

on a winter morning

'gainst a heated wall

heated from the rays

- Promising -

- Funny, ain't it -

how those moments

despite unemployment

and stark uncertainty

were the greatest

and most fertile?

-

Just a thought from experience

looking back

Ghetto butterfly

  • Author: Garth Rakumakoe (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 26th, 2025 09:49
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Powerful in its nakedness. Very nicely written

    • Garth Rakumakoe

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    • Poetic Licence

      A bit of sun on a dark day, when just for a moment life seems ok, enjoyed the read

      • Garth Rakumakoe

        Thank you PL πŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌπŸ™πŸΌ

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tony36

          Powerful write



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