If I identify
With the thoughts
And feelings
Making their fleeting
Appearances on the stage
How can they not control me
Who I believe
Is running the show
Me the way out
Of this maze
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thanks to Katsuki Sekiya for the inspiration.
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Comments5
Thought provoking.
That's the idea! Thanks for dropping by.
Excellent, my friend. Well, written! 🌹👏
Thanks for dropping by. Stay in the eye of the storm!
You know it! You are most welcome!
Another mind tingler, enjoyed the read
I enjoyed your comment too. Thanks a million!
You are very welcome
A fine write, Mutley. Nicely done.
Thanks Tom. I'll try and write a rhyme that speeds up even more one of these days!
the maze never allows you to leave it immediately, so keep pondering on who is actually running the show..
Yes, just who is running the show? Great question!
and the answer???
let's ponder over it awhile
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