Oh, the sadness
In the walls
the sadness in the halls
and we're all
Waiting, to breathe
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Author:
lewisgale mental hospital (
Offline) - Published: March 27th, 2025 23:35
- Category: Reflection
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Oh, the sadness
In the walls
the sadness in the halls
and we're all
Waiting, to breathe
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Comments4
Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
Pain and hurt can imprison you over time and it can feel like the walls are closing in, nicely expressed and written write
There is a sense of being trapped and held in in this poem. It speaks of lack of control and helplessness. A frustrating feeling is left.
Concise, but says a tremendous amount in its brevity. Well done, my friend! Welcome to MPS! 🌹
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