Why Still Blue is the World

H.J. Rivers

The sky shrouds no sin, no veil, no dirge,

only the Wall sobs of wind’s white soot purge;

footsteps swallowed by mother’s pawn,

legacy sunk under the  Snow, a dawn withdrawn.

 

Frost rips the ribs of the faceless land,

the air a scalpel in a surgeon’s hand.

The snow does not fall; it devours, it feeds,

Cold as avenge, sharp as reeds.

 

The stars are fangs, the sky, a maw,

a hunger wrought from ancient law;

no heaven, no hell, no grave nor pyre,

only this field of frost and fire.

 

I walk where Sylvia strained,  

where Lowell given in sonnets chained,  

where Hart Crane plunged & Berryman fell,  

I drone their remnants: hush—don’t tell.  

 

The snow is sharp, a daggered confession,  

flakes like razors—cold yet cushion.  

Respite graves under eons deep,

a lullaby the dead still keep.

 

O Orpheus, turn back again!

The ice is thin, the light is grim,  

my shadow cracks against the rim  

of some abyss—a silver spane

half-mouthed by specters, gaunt & dim.  

 

Their voices buzz like broken wire,

we all have gone, you must go higher.

But higher leads to hollow air,

and lower—O, there’s nothing there.

 

Tell me, Yeats, in linen white,  

does the falcon circle still in flight?  

Or did it crash through ribs of steel,  

its beak a wound that cannot heal?  

 

Sisyphus grins with jagged teeth,  

he knows the sky; it knows his grief.  

It presses down, a bruising weight,  

a coffin lid, a twist of fate.  

 

And tell me, Blake, did angels burn  

or merely flicker, twist, and turn?  

Did Plath taste iron, salt, abyss,  

or only echoes shaped like lips?  

 

O, the sky is a wound that will not close,  

its blueness mocks, it overflows—  

as if the dead could drink and rise,  

as if the breathless could advise.  

 

Then why, still blue, the world remains?  

The veins of trees, the ghost of rains,  

the breath of God upon the glass,  

a scream too vast for throats to grasp.  

 

I speak to silence, it does not speak back,  

it only gives—more space, more lack.  

Each step I take dissolves to mist,  

a footprint never born, dismissed.  

 

Medea’s hands, so red, so raw,  

clutching frost that will not thaw.  

The world turns blue—it laughs, it weeps,  

its sky a promise it never keeps.  

 

No footprints left, no path behind,  

the past undone, the clocks unkind.  

A door of ice, a key of bone—  

the weight of breath, yet not my own.  

 

I step, I slip, I—  

               gone.

 

The world still blue. The sky, still wide.  

The snow, a mouth, gapes open—  

              swallows.

  • Author: H.J. Rivers (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 28th, 2025 06:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is my final poem. The last echo of my words before I fade away. It took me so long to post again and now I know it is the end. I’m truly sorry I didn’t stay longer and couldn’t share more of myself as I know I’m leaving too soon but I hope this poem still reaches you somehow. Thanks for reading, for feeling, for being here. The world is still blue and the sky still wide and somewhere in it, these final words will remain, even if I don’t.
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  • sorenbarrett

    A masterpiece that I must say leaves sadness and a longing feeling. Sad that this must be the closed door to others that might have been. The use of mythology and past poets is brilliant but the feel remains cold and biting. It reveals knowledge of poetry and myth that melt in the spring of new poets and history. These words will remain in my mind as a fave

    • H.J. Rivers

      Thank you for the wonderful words!💙💙💙



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