Sh'es gorgeous
she's whimsical
and fantastic !
My fantasy,
so free and strange ...
Sh'es a picture
in a story book
with friendly giants
and dwarfs who whistle
their way to work .
Sh'es the spirit of the canopy
protecting the forest ,
the joyous waterfall
tumbling down the mountain...
She's an artist as well as an actress,
the morning angel and evening inspiration...
And then she fled ,so mocking and hearthbreaking
leaving the afternoon fauns in despair...
I can't read in her ...
I would like to tell her ...
But she throws me an unsettled scent ,
leaving a taste of liquorice in my dreams...
Sh'es a fairy ,that I know
but also my beloved witch
who casts spells on my scripture ...
And according to her fancy ,
unicorn,sylphe or undine ,
so undefinible avatar ...
I love when she lifts the mask
and becomes a woman again !
She's truly magical ...
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Author:
lorenz (Pseudonym) (
Online)
- Published: March 29th, 2025 03:58
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
In metaphor a real woman I've met yet in reality symbols that have left me. A mystical poem that has deeper meaning and where gratitude is due. What is love but a collection of mystical beliefs and illusions. Nicely written
That elusive feminine creature inside me .My bewitched love !
A very tender, lyrical poem about the hidden, intuitive, and ever-changing feminine essence that resides within a man's soul. It captures the mystery and charm of the Anima - elusive, playful, and transformative - both muse and enchantress, inspiring yet forever unattainable.
Thanks for this charming and poetic comment !
He who seeks to understand his anima does not tame her; he learns to dance with her, to listen, and to let her shape his soul.
Really enjoyed it!
Thank you ! You know I love her still rebellious !
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