I reach out all i found was hidden darkness
i tried to go thorught the darkness and no one was there
i cried out but know one heard io lookup
the sky was black as hell the darkness took my soul
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Online) - Published: March 29th, 2025 08:19
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A poem that begins and ends in darkness upon which is the focus. Very nice
Out of darkness into darkness, the feeling of entering hell, nicely written
In bright darkness I believe !
Darkness bookends. I relate with this, my friend. Strange as it may seem, poetry has helped me find a bit of a friend...or at least a partner...in darkness. Keep writing! Liking what I've read so far! 🌹👏
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