Saoirse is hard working. She owns a little perfume boutique. Making her own fragrances and lotions; she is quite unique. Put herself through college to earn a degree in business ; she’s beginning to wonder if she can still handle this. It’s not like her business is failing by any means. It’s actually thriving; better than predicted it seems. Loved by her costumers, family and friends. Throwing herself in her work; seems it never ends. Realizing this, she’s decided to take time away from it all. Heading to a small town before she wears herself out and the weight causes her to fall. To be away from life’s demands for a while; helps to turn her frown into a smile. Uncertain what the future holds; a risk she must take; what do you think? Is she making a mistake?
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GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ (
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It is intriguing how you leave the reader with a question and then follow up in the next piece. Your poems are stories in which you weave morals. Nicely done
Thank you so much
It's good to recharge every now and then but we will see, enjoyed the read
Appreciate the comment and thank you
You are very welcome
Fantastic.
Thank you Thomas
Good write GS.
Thank you Orchiee
Excellent write
Thank you Tony
You're welcome
I enjoyed both versions actually, though I admittedly read your rework of this first. Well done, my friend, on both pieces. 🌹👏
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