10
stories off the ground
9
just after the jump
8
when you realize you're falling
7
as the panic sets in
6
for a glimpse of regret
5
to be filled with dread
4
as you consider others
3
you try to accept your fate
2
you wish you could take it back
1
you understand pain was temporary
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It takes 10 stories for a jump to be fatal
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Comments4
This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏
Thank you!
You are most welcome, my friend! 🖤🙏
Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.
Thanks for reading!
Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write
Thanks!
You are very welcome
BRAVO
Thank you so much!
You're welcome
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