10 stories

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

10

stories off the ground

9

just after the jump

8

when you realize you're falling

7

as the panic sets in

6

for a glimpse of regret

5

to be filled with dread

4

as you consider others

3

you try to accept your fate

2

you wish you could take it back

1

you understand pain was temporary

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  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 31st, 2025 11:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: It takes 10 stories for a jump to be fatal
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 41
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Poetic Licence
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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like each stage of the fall with the point, such an urgent message, being the ground! Well done! A fave from me for its creativity and boldness. 🌹👏

  • sorenbarrett

    Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black at the end. Wow! very impactful.

    • NinjaGirl

      Thanks for reading!

    • Poetic Licence

      Cleverly crafted and structured write, leading you to the ultimate end, nice write

    • Tony36

      BRAVO

      • NinjaGirl

        Thank you so much!

        • Tony36

          You're welcome



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