Stay focused
Stay focused
What you may see
What you may hear
Sorry
Will you
Stay focused
Stay focused
Fighting a bullet
Insane
My mind
Control
Going head first
Out the the window
7 floors down
Unbelievable
Sick
Stop
Please stop
Don't try to change
You're doomed
Split in half
Pain that you found
A bubble with me in
Burning ashes in the backyard
Over power you
A drummer in the pocket
Covering like a jacket
Begging me to set you free
But I beg you to stop
I have no control
Living on borrowed time
Pain
No game
You're trapped
In here with me
There's no way
I can't find a way out
Walking around with my head down
No eye contact
No action
No feeling
Trying to protect you
Deep motion picture
Find I way to hot tea
Fire to the house
Yes I shoud be hospitalized
Trainwreck
Car crash
Trash day
I lost my mind
Years ago
In love
In friendship
In family
But I'll try
It all
Again
Crazy
Cry
Fight
Deep emotions
A rattlesnake
A guard dog
In it's prime
Please don't stare at me
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Comments3
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and fragmented as thoughts are in desperation they fly like scattered birds. A powerful write.
Panic and fear racing through the distressed mind, making it impossible to think clearly as there are a thousand thoughts all at the same time, well expressed and written
Excellent write
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