Saoirse is leaving today after her shift! She’s left her best friend in charge of the store; she knows that out everyone; Raquel’s got this!! As of right now she’s taking a much needed break! She’s been so busy since she’s got here; she’s had all she can take. There’s a gentleman who hours ago placed a huge order over the phone; to leave on time and get that done? She can’t do it on her own. Raquel is helping her to put it together. Saorise is so blessed to have her. Sterling arrives just as Saorise is about to leave; “he’s so handsome.” She thinks to herself. “Good afternoon ma’am!” “A true gentleman! So hard to believe!” “May I help you?” “I’m here to pick up an order under the name Smith.” “You can leave Raquel.” “I’ve got this.” Sterling is captivated by Saorise’s eyes. “Why don’t you come on inside.?” Looks like there may be a change of plans for today. To find out more; come by another day!
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Author:
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I rewrote yesterdays story as I did not like the direction it took
- Category: Short story
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Sometimes we all would like to rewrite yesterdays story but I believe in following you would find it all works out for the best. And the saga continues. Nicely written.
True; I just thought my first one could’ve been better.
This captured me and I really enjoyed it. You have a gift, my friend. Well done! 🌹
Thank you so much
You are most welcome!
Down one path and then another!!!, enjoyed the read
I know. I apologize for any confusion
No worries it's good fun
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