Raining droplets sporadically falling.
Roofs come crashing thunder stalling.
Rolling winds swirl with leaves.
Soaked and blowing on grounds beneath.
Across the whisper, shadows still.
Stars all silenced, worshipped will.
Falling fast, falling slow.
Umbrella, rainbow, waters flow.
If to shine in hazel skies, a fabric of the eye divine.
A tear to land upon the sand.
Oh rain drops as they patter by.
Oh crying sky, she's shy, all alone my little rain drop, all alone I sigh.
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Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow) and missed the first comma reading it umbrella rainbow which was such an image the rainbow coming after the rain and a promise of protection. Great rhyme patterns internal and line end very nice and leaving a cleansing feeling
Thanks again for your kind words.
Nature's life blood and cleanser, lovely imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
Thank you kindly.
You are very welcome
Great write
Thank you
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