The uneven strokes

arial

She feels so happy oh she could die 

Said the sun kissing her the goodbye 

Along the lines that have never merged 

There lived a girl in that little hat 

Oh, the beat the beat is right 

What to say when we are still alive 

Let me meet them once in a while

Let me meet them oh my precious lie

 

  • Author: arial (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 4th, 2025 17:28
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  • sorenbarrett

    Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written

    • arial

      Thankyou

    • Poetic Licence

      A cleverly crafted enjoyable read

      • arial

        Thankyou glad you liked it

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome



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