If sunshine were a waterfall, your hair would be its stream.
If glass held ocean’s depth, your eyes would shape the dream.
If you lit up the night sky, the stars would shy away.
If my heart were a flower, your breath would make it sway.
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Author:
Ocean Blue (
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Very romantic and beautiful. Well written
A bit of a late reply but I actually never got back until today. Thank you for your kind words.
No problem
Beautifully rendered with tender care. This was wonderful, my friend. Welcome to MPS! 🌹👏
I appreciate the gesture, thanks.
Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
An honor.
A beautiful message to someone, very nicely written, enjoyed the read
Aye, it shall remain in the cage of heart, forevermore until eternity comes to pass.
Welcome to MPS🙏🏻🕊️
Love this poems simplicity, great effect
Thank you.
most welcome
Great write. Great imagery. I really enjoyed it and worth a fav.
Really appreciate it.
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