You shine like a laced rainbow,
With your caramel-brown hair
flowing in undulating curves;
You captivate with your languorous,
rapture-blue eyes and your heart-shaped,
radiant red lips, sweet as Dominican honey.
Your bouncy personality comes through joyfully,
Like the golden glow reflected in the morning dew,
Soft drops, breath-like, mirrored on your face,
A palette splashed with beautiful shades,
And displayed in the voguish clothes you wear.
You mesmerize me and leave me breathless,
Lightheaded and in a state of bliss,
You’re exceptionally enchanting like a
Field of blooming daisies, leaving me
In a state of blissful awe and reverie.
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Author:
rrodriguez (
Offline) - Published: April 5th, 2025 17:27
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is written for my loving wife, Terry. She loves daisies dearly.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Enraptured, smitten, thunderstruck all fit this poem. A beautiful poem dedicated to someone you love. Very nice
Soren, thank you for reading my poem. I changed the title to 'The Bloom of You,' but the poem remains the same. I've been married for 43 years. Thank you for your generous comments.
A beautiful write to the love of their life, nicely done
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