Ottawa in love

Lorenz

This summer Ottawa had the freedom

of your forbidden unveiled .

 Passagers of our  spiceship , 

gossips drifting down the river !

We loved  each other 

in a tornado  of wild blueberries 

and some intimate coconuts .

You were a fruity testing virgin

offered to the sacred totem ,

 Ottawa in love turning our sun dance...

 In front of the window 

that opened onto the night ,

clothed on your splendid nakedness

you tackled some caramelized improv's

on your guitar, offering me

 a trebble key to heaven 

  in fugitive chords 

who enchanted  Bethoveen ! 

I contemplated you 

 emerging  of sleep 

like a kitten stretching out 

on the shores of a cloud ...

  beyond the morning bridge

  it was so much fun 

  to have a  speaking french coffee 

 and a few crunchy croissants ...

  Life was this delicious gobbledy gook !

Do you remember that summer in Ottawa

when faces had not silenced masks ?

  You laughted in the acid of the cherries,

 ruddy juice drawing a  volcano

  on your lips, ma cherie ,

  that I savoured and carried  away ,

 vagabond on the carefree living brandons...

 The sweetness of the indian summer 

 passing by  without a glance

  for the human that doesn't  fly !

   A flock of wild geeses heading south ...

 It's winter in Ottawa , 

  the window has closed ,

   cold stare's totem , evil spell 

 and the white man arrived ...

  You took your guitar 

 running away with  Santa,

playing for the cats 

running across the rooftops ,

so far from Ottawa ,

 so close to my heart ...

 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 7th, 2025 06:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A most beautiful mix of metaphor, fantasy, realities images of a place that exists but yet does not except in memories cast on the shores of love and desire where anything is possible and all things are fond shadows of the past. A hearty stew for a poet. Beautiful!

    • Lorenz

      A little fiction and much of a fruity story !
      I love Ottawa !

    • Ellen Marsell

      A love letter sealed in poetry — fragrant, tender, drifting in memory.

    • Lorenz

      Memory drifting into a sepia shade ...

    • Sealgair

      The lingering scent of a summer that may never return, but continues to live on in the folds of lyricism.

      • Lorenz

        A feeling of fruity musicality !



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