ice water or dirt
I skated on by towards
my destination
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Author:
Demar Desu (
Online) - Published: April 7th, 2025 06:57
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- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one's goal. Lovely
I have places I want to be in life and to do that I have to move!
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
Ease of movement
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