Silver gray
is a privilege
For silver gray
is the collective sum
of experience
and wisdom
In this youth
I pray that my silver gray
be worth the journey
and a holy grail
to pass on
to my descendants
in its dying tooth
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Author:
Garth Rakumakoe (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: April 7th, 2025 07:40
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
A poem I feel in my own silver gray or if your British silver grey. Nicely said
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I found a dark whisker but not my missing teeth.
A lovely write on the journey to old age, enjoyed the read
Hello,
Within this short piece there are many things unfolding, I felt that you were reaching out perhaps sending an intention or a blessing to people dear to you. At the end the tooth made me think of life wisdom. I enjoyed the read!
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