Kundagarten

Mutley Ravishes

There's no question

That a dragon

Has a flexible skeleton

Key to the temple

Bell rings

Cast into the fire

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  • Tony36

    Excellent write

  • sorenbarrett

    A poem that seems a magical chant, it seems that I have missed the key. Nicely done.

    • Mutley Ravishes

      I like that take on the rhyme!
      Well, I guess the key's in the body. I take it you're still in a body?!

    • arqios

      Nice twist, delectable turns🙏🏻🕊️🤩

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Thanks! There's a river in Japan called "Nine-Headed Dragon River." I must visit it someday!

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Plenty of twists in this tremendously short poem. It's never about quanity...always about quality. And this is most definitely quality.

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the serpentine twists. Things seem to turn out better when I keep the rhymes short.

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            You bet, my friend!

          • Poetic Licence

            This could tie you in knots with all it's twists, really enjoyed the read

            • Mutley Ravishes

              I was hopeless at learning to tie knots as a boy cub/scout! Seems I can do a lot better with words.

            • sunshine777

              Nice! Flexible skeleton.... Definitely got me thinking

              • Mutley Ravishes

                Thanks. Imagine a dragon trying to take off with frozen shoulder-wings, osteoporosis, fused bones and the like!

                • sunshine777

                  I wonder..... Thinking u could write a novel on this one



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