There's no question
That a dragon
Has a flexible skeleton
Key to the temple
Bell rings
Cast into the fire
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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- Published: April 7th, 2025 19:03
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Comments6
Excellent write
Thanks, Tony.
You're welcome
A poem that seems a magical chant, it seems that I have missed the key. Nicely done.
I like that take on the rhyme!
Well, I guess the key's in the body. I take it you're still in a body?!
Nice twist, delectable turns🙏🏻🕊️🤩
Thanks! There's a river in Japan called "Nine-Headed Dragon River." I must visit it someday!
Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Plenty of twists in this tremendously short poem. It's never about quanity...always about quality. And this is most definitely quality.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the serpentine twists. Things seem to turn out better when I keep the rhymes short.
You bet, my friend!
This could tie you in knots with all it's twists, really enjoyed the read
I was hopeless at learning to tie knots as a boy cub/scout! Seems I can do a lot better with words.
Nice! Flexible skeleton.... Definitely got me thinking
Thanks. Imagine a dragon trying to take off with frozen shoulder-wings, osteoporosis, fused bones and the like!
I wonder..... Thinking u could write a novel on this one
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