as she was walking out the door

Jon Nakapalau

she was surprised by the rain
falling even as the sun still
was high in the sky it was
light and dried as soon
as it touched her but
she decided that it
was a sign that it
was time to
leave him
today
now.

  • Author: Jon Nakapalau (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 7th, 2025 20:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: For a friend.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 8
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  • sorenbarrett

    Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a single finishing word. Lovely



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