whispering wind
twinkling stars
boiling dreams
silence of heart
countless needs
fading voices
flowing words
waving curtains
breaking hopes
flickering candles
thoughts causing havoc
bunches of flowers eager to wither
nd I.....kept "waiting..."
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Author:
dimpsmoon (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: my first...
- Category: Sad
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Comments5
IT SPEAKS HEARTACHE IN VERY FEW WORDS..MOST LOVELY
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A poem that leaves feelings of hanging hopes and desires unfulfilled and a feeling of waiting. Well written and hopeful. Very nice.
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A sense of a heart in distress, nicely expressed and written
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