Miles to go
Sometimes i feel fearful, it's not just in my head
The fear of losing,The fear of not doing enough.
When I look up to the destination, It's still miles away,
But along the path when i have covered some distance,
Why I fear of moving forward,
Why I am scared that I will get crushed.
In such a crucial moment
Why I am giving up on myself ,
When earlier I never did.
The dilemma, whether it's the courage or stubborness, to move ahead fuels the fear even more.
I have a choice to make ,
But the fear has grappled my intellect.
Because if I don't choose someone else will, And will that mean right for me.
It's the question hour, maybe we all face it,
And for now, All I know the answer lies
only behind the decision.
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Author:
_jyotsna27 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Here's a short write up , expressing the uncertanity we face , when we dont know what lies ahead or when some crucial decisions are to be made which shape the course of our life... Hope you enjoy the read.
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Comments4
A write most all of us can identify with. Very nicely done
Hello,
This is a reflective insightful poem on the human condition and existentialism. There are a few moments where there was perhaps a struggle taking place. Be it an inner or outer struggle or both. This is often innate to us as humans. You are brave to write a confessional poem. Greetings and blessings,
R
Excellent write
Very relatable write over the fear of the future and what is to come and in turn that effects our decision making process, nicely expressed and written
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