If I'm ever gonna fall in love
It is going to be you
Please do not break my heart
What is life
People suffering
Others in bliss
Dear Devil
I hate you
The Devil is already dead.....
ALK
Sunshine
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Author:
Amanda Klessig (Sunshine) (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: April 8th, 2025 10:13
- Category: Surrealist
- Views: 12
Comments3
A poem that requires thought and pondering. Most interesting.
Thank u. It's good to use more then one view of our brain, in my opinion
The contrasts of life suffering and bliss the you have options of who the devil is, I get a sense of past or desired partner, interesting and thought provoking write, enjoyed the read
Thank u! Under certain circumstances I believe we could all find a little devil in us. After all he was once a angel
Very true
It's been said that the Devil is our ultimate psychological trainer.
Oh, I have not heard that until now.... Wow. That's really deep but so real
For sure. Those myriad temptations test us to the limits, don't they?!
They absolutely do!
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