Bury your hate
Deep within me
Don't hold back
Please give me everything
Don't stop now
Just because I'm bleeding
Cutting me deeper
Force it all in me
You know that I need it
The burning desire
Freeing your demons
Let your rage uprise
Throwing me over
Restraining me tight
Lightning and thunder
Into the storm we ride
Can you hear it
Screaming in the dark
Can you feel it
Breaking me apart
Can you see it
Buried in me
All of your hate
All of your rage
Please
Feed it all to me
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Author:
KTay (
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- Published: April 9th, 2025 10:31
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Comments4
Mmmm. I can feel the hurt, the pain...the defiance. Well done on this, friend! 🏡🌹👏
Thank you!
You are most welcome!
A most interesting concept that we used to do to goats or other animals from which we get the name scape goat. A most sacrificing theme.
Thank you!
That is packed with pain, hurt, anger and more than anything defiance, as if to say do whatever you want you cannot hurt me anymore than you already have, nicely expressed and written
Thank you so much!
You are very welcome
I can feel the anger...that rage that can be used as fuel, almost something hopeful. Beautifully written.
Thank you!
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